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My Little Tops pt1

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On a beautiful sunny day in a world known as Equestria there lays a peaceful little village called Ponyville. In this marvelous setting is home to many colorful ponies that like us live, walk and talk like any other normal person. They come in three different species like your regular ponies, then there are the flying Pegasus and of course the magical Unicorns. Among these ponies there live six familiar ponies.

Twilight Sparkle the newest resident to Ponyville whom is very knowledgeable and studies various magic. She often sends her reports on friendship back to her tutor Princess Celestia.  With a little help from her friend Spike the baby dragon.

Then there is Rarity another Unicorn who loves to be a center of attention and has a flare for fashion. But do not let her dramatics fool you for she can be very generous.

Fluttershy one of the Pegasus's is a sweet animal loving pony but is often very shy around others. Luckily she has great friends to help bring her out of her shell from time to time.

Pinkie Pie is a party loving, silly-song making, giggling and very talkative pony whom loves pranks and games. She is one of the pony's best friend and party planner.

Then there is Applejack a country girl earth pony who helps run her families Apple crop business. She is loyal and dependable and very honest.

Last there is another Pegasus pony named Rainbow Dash this tomboy pony girl lives up to her name as she is very athletic and speedy. She can take off faster than you can say "Ready, set, go." Mischievous, bold and proud but that doesn't mean she'll leave off her friends behind she is very loyal to the end. Even if there are times when she has to give up her dreams of joining the Wonderbolts team.

Yes it is no surprise that Ponyville is one of the friendliest places of Equestria.

Sinister voice: I HATE THISSSSSSSSSSSS PLANET!

Viewing on in a viewing mirror in Dark World however the Intergalactic Demon's Dark Masters watches the ponies. Nightvenom the Dark Cobra master hisses in anger as Lady Phobia, the dark spider master is playing a quiet game of chess with Krakatora the Dark Kraken master.

Krakatora: Darling honestly how can you stomach that DREADFUL planet of cute ponies being so…UGH friendly?

Lady Phobia: It's because he has nothing better to do. After all the big old snake can't even defeat our enemies the Tops on earth so he has to find some weaker victims for him to plague upon.

Nightvenom: Ssssssilence you two cackling witchessssssssssssssss. I am Nightvenom the mosssssssssssssst powerful of the Dark Mastersssssssssssssssssssssss. Thisssssssssssssssssss horrid disssssssssssssplay of friendssssssssssssssssssship mussssssssssssssst come to an end. If it'ssssssssssssssssssss one thing we Intergalactic Demonssssssssssssssssss won't ssssssssssssssssstand for issssssssssssssss friendssssssssssship.

Just then out of the shadows came Shadowpaw the Dark Wolf master as he twirls his daggers and puts them back in his holders.

Shadowpaw: Greetings my followers of evil. I have located one of our imprisoned Dark Masters on Equestria.

Nightvenom: Excellent! Who issssssssssss it?

Shadowpaw: Why don't we let him introduce himself? Oh Diablo Toro!

Then entering into the room is the tall armor plated bull man Diablo Toro as he bellows in happiness.

Diablo Toro: Ah Dark World how I miss it. At last after being imprison in my mountain holdup for countless years thanks to Princess Celestia. Now tell me my friends why did you free me?

Nightvenom: Ssssssssssso you can help usssssssssssssssssssssssss dessssssssstroy our enemiessssssssssss on earth. The onessssssssssssss called the Topssssssssssssssssssss.

Diablo Toro: So you freed me to be a hired gun? No I still have much work to do on Equestria.

He looks over at Krakatora and Lady Phobia.

Diablo Toro: But of course if these two lovely ladies would make it worth my while?

Krakatora: Ugh he is such a bullheaded dark master.

Lady Phobia: Oh I don't know at least he's got good taste.

Nightvenom: You foolisssssssssssssh bullheaded demon. Ssssssssssssssshadowpaw help freed you and thisssssssssssss issssssssssss the thanksssssssssssssss we get?

Diablo Toro: Insolent snake now that I'm free I will have my revenge on Princess Celestia and take over what is rightfully mine. As ruler of Equestria. Whatever problems you have with these creatures you call Tops you are on your own.

He teleports himself out of Dark World before Shadowpaw could fling one of his daggers at the bull.

Shadowpaw: Grr ingrate! We needed him to help us destroy the Tops for good.

Then a shadowy dragon image of the Dark Dragon Master appeared.

Dragon figure: Not to worry my follow Dark Masters. Dark Skull himself told me that sooner or later Diablo Toro will face the Tops soon and when he does. The Tops will wish they have never crossed us in the first place.

Dark Masters: BRU HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!

Meanwhile our setting now takes place on earth in Celestial City where a bank heist was being held. A group of masked robbers made off with bags full of money.

Possum robber: All right none of you move and no one gets hurt. Come on.

They made it to their getaway van where their driver waited for them.

Pig robber: Got the loot?

Cat robber: It's right here.

Bear robber: Yeah now drive!

The pig robber drove the van but was stopped short. The robbers look behind them in the rearview mirror and saw one of the Tops named Curly holding the back of the van with his amazing strength.

Cat robber: YIKES! It's one of those tiny triceratops kids. That mean…

Suddenly Curly is joined by his other three brothers Toppy, Boxcy and Socky.

Toppy: You guess it punk.

Tops: IT'S BATTLE TIME!

Possum Robber: Quick! Give me a gun! I'll make them eat lead.

His partner handed him his gun and he points it at Toppy.

Possum Robber: Okay you little brat. Tell your brother to let us go or…

Toppy: RAZOR FLAKES!

Toppy fired snowflakes from his hand and once the icy snow hits the possum's hand it quickly formed ice around the gun preventing the robber from using it.

Possum Robber: Or…I'll be sorry?

Toppy: Well since you asked so nicely and apparently your vehicle is still running. Oh Curly be a sport and aim the van that way.

Curly: Duh you got it bro. Like this?

Toppy: Perfect now let them go!

Curly had turn the van around and let it loose as it rushes off and crashes straight into a pillow factory where the crooks crashed into a crate of feather pillows. The crooks sprawled out of their getaway van all spitting out feathers.

Boxcy: Well what you know? Those lousy mugs are nothing but lousy chickens.

Pig Robber: I'll them show lousy chicken.

He brought out his sledge hammer and is about to swing it hard on Boxcy's head. But Boxcy using his super speed moved out of the way of the pig robber. The huge pig robber tried again and again to hit Boxcy with his hammer but kept missing until the pig robber was on a brink of exhaustion. He wobbled back and forth until Boxcy blew a gentle puff of air knocking the big robber to his back.

Meanwhile Socky is dealing with the cat robber as the cat arms himself with a machete.

Cat Robber: Now I'll deal with you.

Socky pulls out a deck of cards from his pants pockets and started shuffling them.

Socky: Deal? Okay what you want to play? Solitaire? Poker? Blackjack? Uno? Yu-gi-oh? Ah ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha.

The cat burglar swings his machete but misses as Socky using his rubber body to morph his legs into spring coils and bounce around the crook. Then he morphed his fist into an anvil and punched the Cat out cold.

Socky: * Imitating announcer's voice* And once again Socky takes the champion title. * Imitates Ali* Yeah I float like a butterball and stink like a skunk. I mess up that famous saying but I think the people in the viewing audience know what I'm talking about. * Normal voice* Ah ha, ha, ha, ha.

Meanwhile the possum robber tries to escape the commotion but is encountered by Toppy.

Toppy: Now I'm giving you one more chance to surrender.

Possum robber: Never! You haven't seen the last of us.

Toppy: Didn't want to do this but…THUNDERSHOCK!

Toppy fires a thunderbolt from his hands that zapped the possum leaving him brunt and charred.

Possum: * Coughs out black smoke* You've seen the last of us…UGH! * Faints*

Soon the police force escorted the crooks off to jail as the Police chief shook the Tops hands.

Police chief: Thanks Tops. When you four ever graduate from high school ever thought of taking a career as police men? We can use you four with your super powers on the force.

Toppy: Thanks but we still got 4th grade to finish up…YIKES! Which reminds me guys we better hurry and get to school or we'll be late!

The Tops quickly made it to school on time and enjoyed the morning of learning and studying with some of their school buddies. However during lunch time the Tops like any kids in school have problems with bullies. One kid purposely stuck his foot out and caused Curly to trip with his lunch tray causing a mess. Another kid was calling Toppy a freak. A girl bumped into Boxcy and told him to stay away from her or he'll give her his ugliness. Another school bully told Socky his face looked stupid. The Tops ate together with some of their school friends as Boxcy growls in anger.

Boxcy: Those lousy mugs.

Toppy: Easy Boxcy remember your anger control lessons.

Boxcy: Why can't we beat the bullies up? I mean we got super powers.

Toppy: I know but you know what King Archery and Queen Zeta of the Intergalactic Angels told us about misusing our super powers.

Tops: * Sighs* We can only use our powers when it's necessary. Not to be use for personal matters or pushing people around.

Curly: Duh it's so not fair. Duh we don't deserve to be bullied.

Socky: Man no one deserved to be bullied.

Toppy: I know and it's not right but we can't fight the bullies. Remember what happen the last time we let our fists to settle with a bully?

Boxcy: Yeah the jerk's parents called our Mom and she grounded us for a month.

Curly: Duh not to mention we got suspended from school for two weeks. I missed taco Tuesday.

Socky: Not to mention we lost out on the movie field trip too.

Boxcy: And those bullies knew we can't use our powers on them. But you're right Toppy we need to find better ways to deal with bullies but what?

Toppy: I don't know guys at least they don't bother us when we're with our friends or each other.

After school the Tops went home to their Mother Carla Brown Cow whom just pulled up into the driveway and greeted her sons. They help her carry in the groceries as they settle in.

Carla: Well boys what's on your mind?

Toppy: Nothing Mom why do you ask?

Carla: Honey I know you four for a long time. I maybe a cow but I know when four little triceratops are having a problem.

Toppy: Oh…well Mom it's the bullies at school. I don't get it we're super heroes we help save the day and fight monsters and bad guys. But why do they pick on us?

Boxcy: Yeah it's not fair we didn't do anything to deserve being bullied.

Curly: Duh but you wouldn't know what that is like.

Socky: Yeah mom it's not like you were pick on as a kid.

Carla: Now you four just wait a minute. I'll have you know that when I was a little girl I was bullied at school too. They called me names and made fun of me. There was a time one of the planted a peanut butter and jelly sandwich in my seat and I sat on it. Boys every adult was bullied when they were kids so don't think that we don't know what it was like.

Toppy: Well what did you do about it?

Carla: I told the teacher and when that didn't help I told my parents about it. I stuck around my friends and I talked to an adult I could trust like my counselor and gym teacher.

Toppy: They are lucky we can't use our super powers on them.

Carla: I'm glad you four don't because violence can't solve every thing. I also stood up to the bullies who were picking on me.

Curly: Duh but didn't you get beat up?

Carla: I did a few times. But the beating stopped when the bullies realize they can't push me around plus the Teachers had a harsh talk with them and their parents.

Toppy: Thanks for the talk Mom. We feel much better and I guess we know what to do.

Carla: Good now later after supper I'll call the school board.

Boxcy: What for?

Carla: I'm going to ask them what they attend to do about this bullying nonsense at the school. They should have a program that should help deal with this sort of thing.

Socky: Oh if they say anything about a pig in a girl's bathroom I have nothing to do with it…much ah ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha.

All: SOCKY!

Socky: What?

Back in Equestria in Ponyville all was sunny happy and normal. At a school for little ponies Applejack's sister Apple Bloom was playing with her friends a baby unicorn named Sweetie Belle and a baby Pegasus named Scoota-loo were playing catch with a rubber ball. Sweetie belle kicked the ball too hard as Apple Bloom went after it.

Apple Bloom found the ball near a group of ponies she asked for the ball back but as the brown pony was about to give it back to her a strange black cloud appeared over his head and then it seeps into his mind. Then he gave an evil grin and planted the ball on the picket fence popping it.

Apple Bloom: Hey! That wasn't nice of y'all. Why did you do that for?

Brown pony: Because I'm bigger than you. Oh by the way watch out for the mud.

He kicked mud in her face as he and his buddies just laughed and walked away.

Apple Bloom: Yuck…that wasn't nice.

Meanwhile Pinkie Pie was preparing her shop for a birthday party when she got a visitor. A tall rooster man wearing a business type suit appears.

Pinkie Pie: Hi there are you excited? Because I'm excited I've never been so excited well not since the time I went GASP! When my friend Twilight came to town but this tops them all because I get to host a birthday party and get to play party games, wear party hats, open party gifts I love to party and…hey who are you?

Rooster man: The names Peckles De Heckler. My card little lady an all around stand-up comedian. I was wondering if I can give my service to help you entertain your clients for their party.

Pinkie Pie: Really? Wow that will be great the party will start in a few minutes so can you please come I love jokes I like all kinds of jokes except for dirty jokes those jokes are nasty you don't have any dirty jokes right? I hope not because BLAH who wants to hear jokes about mud?

Peckles: Oh don't worry little lady my jokes are clean. * To himself* But for my dark master they'll make everyone else feel dirty.

Soon at the party Pinkie Pie introduced to her clients Peckles as he took center stage.

Peckles: Now who is the lucky birthday pony?

Orange pony boy: Me.

Peckles: Great…because you are so ugly whenever you enter into the room mice jumps on chairs.

Orange pony boy: What?

Peckles: Oh I apologize you're not ugly. Just plain gruesome looking.

Pinkie pie: What? Hey you can't insult him it's his party.

Peckles: Hey it's his party and he'll cry like a crybaby if he wants to. Isn't that right short, stumpy and ugly?

The pony boy started crying as his parents and party guests leaves Pinkie's house.

Pinkie Pie: W-wait where are you going?

Pony boys mother: We're leaving we won't come here ever again to be insulted.

Peckles: Okay where do you stupid ponies go to be insulted? Ha, ha, ha, ha.

Pinkie Pie: Hey that wasn't funny.

Peckles: Not as funny as your face. Seriously they dare let you out in public like that? I go back on the sweets if I were you sister you're so fat every time you jump in the air you get stuck. Ha, ha, ha, ha.

Pinkie Pie eyes began to water then she ran out crying from the insults as Peckles pulls out his contact watch and contacts with his dark master Diablo Toro.

Diablo Toro: Well is it working?

Peckles: Yeah boss I've insulted the little pink horse's party guests so bad they all left the room and I made her cry her little heart out.

Diablo Toro: Good and what of the others?

Peckles: Queen Bee-bee is over at that white unicorns fashion shop right now and your dark clouds all ready made a few ponies into nasty bullies. Plus I saw Doubter heading to where the blue rainbow Pegasus is flying and couple of your special pig ogres is working on harassing some little animals at that yellow Pegasus girl's place.

Diablo Toro: Good, good soon my bullying will spread so far and wide all over Equestria that it will end all friendship on this planet and soon it will consume by total darkness making Equestria part of Dark World forever. Then my revenge on Princess Celestia will be complete.

The next day Twilight is walking home with her baby dragon friend Spike riding on her back.

Twilight: Sure was a long walk but at least we got our business done.

Spike: Yeah making sure all the flowers in the mountains were presented and accounted for sure took a while.

Twilight: It'll be nice to see some of our friends again…hmm?

Spike: What is it Twilight?

Twilight: Spike doesn't it seem so…I don't know dark for Ponyville?

Spike: Hey yeah you're right. The Pegasus ponies should have clear up the skies by now the weather calls for warm and sunny today.

Twilight: And Rainbow Dash loves breaking up rain clouds…where is she?

Spike: Hey I think I see her.

They saw Rainbow Dash sulking under a tree. Her wings were droopy as she hung her head low, something was very wrong and Twilight could feel it.

Twilight: Hey Rainbow Dash what the matter? Why aren't you breaking the clouds for the sun?

Rainbow Dash: I don't feel like it.

Twilight: Well that's not the Rainbow I know. Come on you loved flying in the sky and breaking the clouds.

Rainbow Dash: Didn't you hear me? I just don't feel like it.

Spike: We were only wondering why you are not chasing clouds. What would the Wonderbolts say?

Twilight: Yeah you'll never get to be on their team if you don't do your job.

Rainbow: What's that suppose to mean? You don't think I will make it either? Fine! I thought you were my friends but I guess everyone is right. I'll never make it on the team and I WON'T CLEAR UP YOUR STUPID CLOUDS NOW LEAVE ME ALONE!

Rainbow Dash quickly zooms up to her cloud home in the sky and just locked the door behind her. Twilight and Spike were shock to see how their friend was reacting. So they decided to visit Applejack on her family apple orchard to see what the problem was.

Twilight: Hey Applejack.

Applejack: Howdy Twilight…howdy Spike.

Twilight: Hey Apple do you know what's wrong with Rainbow Dash?

Applejack: I reckon I don't but I have a problem of my own. I got calls from her teacher telling me that she and her friends been skipping school for the past few days.

Twilight: What? Why?

Applejack: I don't know I try to get her to talk to me but…something is really bothering her and she's too upset to eat or speak. I'm her big sister gosh darn it she should tell me anything.

Twilight: I'm sure she'll tell you…eventually.

Applejack: I love to help you out Twilight…but right now I'm down right too sad and worry about my little sister to be of any help.

Twilight and Spike left Applejack and went on over to Rarity's shop and was surprise to find it close. They look inside and find Rarity flinging all of her clothes to the ground ripping some of them apart.

Rarity: NO, NO, NO, AND NO! Oh darling this is so dreary, too poofy, too fluffy, too…white? UGH! None of them are perfect, perfect, not a single one of them. They are all ugly, ugly, and ugly. * Starts sobbing*

Twilight: Rarity what's wrong?

Rarity: There is this new fashion diva the most exclusive consultant of the fashion world. She came here a couple of days ago after you and Spike left and was looking for the perfect clothing for the Princess Celestia's Gala…but when I showed her my work…she said they were all better off as…dish rags. She is given me another chance to show her my old works and new works…but she said the Princess would hate every one of them…oh I'm beside myself. Please just leave me alone.

Twilight: But…but…

It was too late she and Spike was shoved out of the shop by Rarity's magic.

Twilight: Spike this is getting weird.

Spike: You think that's weird look over at Pinkie Pie's place. It's empty.

Spike was right. Pinkie Pie shop usually was filled with sweets pies and creamy cakes but the window shows nothing but emptiness and darkness. They hear voices coming from the building. When Twilight opens the door she got hit in the face by a rotten tomato. Spike can't help but laugh as Twilight wiped the gooey tomato off her face.

Then they both heard a sound of "PSST!" They look over and saw Pinkie Pie hiding under a picnic table her eyes shown that she has been crying recently.

Spike: Pinkie what happen?

Twilight: And who threw that tomato?

Pinkie Pie: The…new owner…he…took over…I'm out of the partying business.

Spike: Huh? But why?

Pinkie Pie: I don't want to talk about it I'm too…sad.

Twilight was in a state of shock. Her friend Pinkie Pie is usually happy and uplifting but this has been a rare moment when Pinkie is ever sad. They left her alone and went over to Fluttershy's house but could not find Fluttershy or her little animal friends anywhere. They see tracks of pig hoofs all over but no sign of their friend.

Twilight: Spike this is getting strange.

Spike: Yeah where are Fluttershy and all of her animal friends?

Twilight look at Fluttershy's house and saw Fluttershy's eyes peeking out the window.

Twilight: Fluttershy? Are you in there?

Fluttershy: Please don't tease my animal friends…j-j-just go.

Twilight: Fluttershy it's me.

Fluttershy: Oh…h-hello Twilight.

Twilight: Fluttershy what's wrong? Why are you hiding in your home and…what the?

From the window she could see Fluttershy's house is filled from floor to floor with all kinds of her tiny animal friends.

Fluttershy: It's the only place where we can feel safe.

Spike: From what?

Fluttershy: I…I can't say.

Twilight: Why not?

Fluttershy: I don't want to be a tattletale. Please just leave me.

Back at Twilight's house, the library, she and Spike wrote a letter to Princess Celestia.

Twilight: "Dear Princess Celestia.

I hope things are fine in Canterlot but things are not so well here in Ponyville. My friends are feeling very sad like something is bothering them all. But it's like they are either afraid or too upset to tell us what's wrong. I know something is amiss with our friendship…is it my fault? Did I do something wrong. I don't know what to do so please is there anyone who can help me?

Sign your faithful student.

Twilight."

Spike using his magic fire blew onto the letter and was on its way to Canterlot.

Spike: Do you think she'll find the answer?

Twilight: I hope so Spike. Because if nothing is done then I have a feeling it'll be a dark day in Ponyville forever.

Suddenly Spike burped up the letter sent by the Princess herself.

Spike: Ahem…it reads. "My faithful student Twilight.

Do not despair my little pony for I know what the problem is. I have sent a message to some very special beings that will send help right away.

Signed
Princess Celestia."

Twilight: Help? From who?

Back on Earth the Tops got a call from Queen Zeta of the Intergalactic Angels as the tall angelic woman stood before them.

Tops: We are at your service day and night.
We do the job we do it right.
Tops! Tops!

Socky: SWING IT! * Gets kick in the rear by Boxcy* OW! Hmm! Ruff-ruff!

Boxcy: Cut it out. Yes Zeta what is it?

Curly: Duh monsters on the run?

Boxcy: Mad scientists on the loose?

Toppy: Another Intergalactic Demon attack?

Socky: We ran out chili for the super bowl?

Zeta: My wondrous little Tops.

Tops: LITTLE? We're not little we just haven't gotten our growth spurts yet.

Zeta: You four are going to a planet of Equestria where you must help out Twilight and her friends deal with serious issues her town is facing.

Toppy: Egad what is it?

Zeta: Bullies.

Tops: Bullies?

Curly: Duh us handle bullies.

Zeta: No you must help teach the Ponies how to deal with bullies.

Boxcy: Ponies? You mean as in horses?

Zeta: It is a planet of wondrous ponies whose magic's are given to them by friendship…but serious bullying issues is destroying that magic and it's up to you four and your soon-to-be-new-friend Twilight Sparkles.

Toppy: But your highness we don't know how to handle bullies…at least not violently.

Zeta: I know you four will help. I believe in you.

Tops: Okay your majesty. We'll do our best.

Zeta: That's what I like to hear.

Toppy: So when do we leave?

Zeta: Right now.

Tops: Uh-oh!

Zeta clapped her hand creating a blue beam of light that shines on the Tops and teleports them to Equestria.

Zeta: Princess Celestia my old friend. Help is on its way.

Back on Equestria Twilight Sparkles and Spike are in the middle of Ponyville where the instructions on the letter told them to meet their help.

Spike: Well this is the place.

Twilight: And we're supposed to meet the helpers we need…but where are they?

Suddenly they look up in the air and saw four little objects falling towards them. They both moved out of the way and then a loud CRASH was heard. They both look and saw a small hole with the Tops in it. The Tops groan and moan in pain as they crawled out of the hole and saluted to Twilight and Spike.

Tops: * Woozy tones* We're at your service day and night.
We do the job and do it right…UGH! * all fainted*

Twilight: These are the help? Boy are we in trouble.

Can the Tops help Twilight with her friends bullying issues? Will Diablo Toro put all of Equestria into eternal darkness and end the magic of friendship forever? Stay tune for part 2 coming soon.
Yep my newest story as the Tops are helping out the newest generations of MLP's from the TV show on the Hub Channal "My Little Pony: Friendship is magic."

Click here to learn more about the show. [link]

In this story the Tops are summon to the world of Equestria to help Twilight Sparkles and her friends deal with bullying that is threating the magic of friend while facing a new Dark Master Diablo Toro. Can the Tops help the ponies and end the bullying problem? You'll have to read this one and the upcoming chapters to find out.

The idea came to me from watching the TV show and reading issues on how bullying has finally becoming a serious problem.

Anyways all Tops characters copyrighted to me Koleyl.

My Little Ponies copyrighted to Hasbro and Lauren Faust the creator of the Powerpuff Girls and Fosters Home for Imaginary Friends
© 2011 - 2024 Koleyl
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Coraleana's avatar
X3 awesome! I loved the my little ponies when I was little.
Great story so far.^^