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Problem in Poland

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Suzie moaned and groaned as she wakes up to find herself tied up with ropes around a chair. She tried to talk but only to discover her mouth was wrapped shut by a large cloth that prevented her from talking. She looked around and saw her friend Kate is in the same situation she was in. She moans loudly under her gag to wake her friend up while trying to remember what had happen to them both.

It started out normally since the day they arrived to Warsaw Poland. Kate has won a contest and the prize was a trip for two to Warsaw Poland. The girls were over come by the wondrous sights of all the wonderful palaces and mansions it felt like they have traveled back in time. They took a bus driven by a nice green cat man named Anthony over to visit one of the palaces like the Krasinski Palace, the Palace on the water, and the Palace of the four winds.

Suzie was surprise to see her college science teacher Carla Brown Cow in Poland as they visited the Royal Baths Park. Suzie liked Carla because of Carla's kindness and sweet nature. Carla was escorted by her friend Gundaman as Kate flirts with the handsome human Carla and Suzie took pictures of the statues and the lovely peacocks. Carla told her she was accepting her science award at the National Museum and Gundaman agreed to be her escort.

The four later on visited the National Stadium and checked out the players practicing for an upcoming football (AKA: Soccer to us Americans) then they visited the Grand Theatre and the Palace of Culture and Science. They all had a good time but Suzie wish Kate didn't flirt with Gundaman so much it was embarrassing to her and it was probably making Carla feel jealous.

Later the two decides to go back to their hotel room so they could get ready to go with Carla when she accepts her award. Gundaman warned the two girls to be very careful for tourist especially young women have been disappearing a lot lately and he hopes that they would be safe. Suzie assured him that they both would be okay and so they called for a taxi cab as Gundaman and Carla head back to their hotel room on Gundaman's G-cycle.

In the cab the two girl's cab driver is a mole man named Eddy who greeted them with a soft smile as Kate instructed him to get them to their hotel room. As Kate was busy checking herself in her compact mirror Suzie was looking out the window and notice something was amiss, she look her map and realize that they were not going the right way. She tapped on the back of the taxi cabs window but suddenly the doors were automatically locked tight then the back of the cab was filled with green gas. Suzie and Kate both panic and try to unlock the doors but it was too late the gas has put them to sleep.

Suzie struggled in her ropes trying to free herself. She hears footsteps in the darkness and saw Eddy as he cackles evilly at his two victims.

Eddy: This is a great scam. Kidnap a few dumb tourists and sell them off to a black slave market to some rich dudes across the sea and get pay big bucks. You two look like you make some rich guy happy. I'll just shred your identities and passports and it'll be like you two never even arrived here.

Kate and Suzie yelled in protest under their gags.

Eddy: Sorry ladies it's nothing personal it's just business. Besides no one will come to rescue you two, your families are across the sea and no one even knows you're here.

Man's voice: Don't bet on it.

Eddy look up and got greeted by a punch in a face. Eddy got knocked down and crashed into a few boxes, he look up and saw Gundaman while Carla is untying both Suzie and Kate from their ropes.

Eddy: What the heck? How did you find me?

Gundaman: I had a hunch that someone would kidnap two attractive ladies and my hunches are never wrong. So Suzie I placed a tracking device on your sweater and when Carla was getting worried that you two never arrived to meet us she figure something was wrong.

Suzie: How did you know that Carla?

Carla: You are one of the most prompt students I know you never arrived late a day in your life for any of my classes.

Kate: Oh Gundaman my hero!

Eddy: Hah don't think you got me just yet. HEY BOYS GET IN HERE! Did you think I do this slave ring by myself human?

Suddenly from the door was a small group of rat thugs. Two tall rat men carrying clubs jumped towards Gundaman but he gave them a spin kick that knocked them down. A fat rat carrying a ax was about to chop Gundaman but he grabbed the ax's handle and broke it in half with a karate chop. Then he punched the rat in the face over and over again.

As Gundaman defeats rat after rat. Eddy snuck around and grabbed Carla from behind and held a knife close to her neck. After defeating the last rat thug Gundaman turns his attention to Eddy and Carla as Eddy held his captive close.

Eddy: One move and Miss Chubby butt here is going to turn into hamburgers.

Carla: Help! Help…chubby butt? CHUBBY BUTT?

Kate: Oh no he didn't.

Suzie: Oh yes he did.

Carla: HOW DARE YOU! I'M NOT CHUBBY! I'M JUST FULL FIGURE!

Carla elbowed Eddy in the stomach causing him to drop his knife and then she picked him up and started punching him left and right.

Carla: HOW DARE YOU MAKE FUN OF MY WEIGHT! I'VE NEVER BEEN SO INSULTED IN MY LIFE! YOU CRUDE, MISERABLE, HORRIBLE LITTLE MAN! I HAVE A GOOD MIND TO!

Eddy shielded himself with his arms.

Carla: Don't you dare slap me!

Eddy dropped his guard.

Eddy: Who's slapping? * Gets punched again* OW!

Carla: YOU HORRIBLE! NASTY! UNCARING BRUTE!

She punched Eddy towards Gundaman as he picked him up by the neck collar.

Gundaman: Now Eddy I know both Kate and Suzie were not your only victims. I'll bet you had a handle in lot of disappearances lately haven't you?

Eddy: Er…maybe but I'm not talking.

Gundaman: Well you got two choices. Either you tell me what happen to the other kidnapped victims and where me and a few police friends can find them? Or you can deal with a mad cow? Pick your choice.

Eddy look over at Carla and shook in horror.

Eddy: OKAY! OKAY! ON MY COMPUTER I HAVE A JUMP DRIVE OF ALL THE KIDNAPPED PEOPLE AND WHO THEY WERE SOLED TO! IT'S ALL THERE! PLEASE DON'T LET HER NEAR ME AGAIN!

After the following week of the kidnapping incident their visit in Poland was very enjoyable for Kate and Suzie. As they join Carla and Gundaman on the flight back home.

Kate: You know Suzie Poland is very peaceful and a joy to visit.

Suzie: It is now thanks to Gundaman.

The End.
A story requested by Levvvar who wanted his characters Kate and Suzie to be in a damsels-in-distress stituation in Poland. Luckily the mighty Gundaman was there to save them.

Gundaman copyrighted to himself.

Suzie, Kate, Eddy and Anthony copyrighted to Levvvar.

Carla and story copyrighted to me.
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HypercatZIsMyKing's avatar
And that is why you never call a cow fat! As Red Dwarf's Rimmer said once in Season 5, "That's the equivalent of putting your wedding tackle in a sleeping lion's mouh and hitting his love spuds with a wet towel!" Red Dwarf 4EVER!