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The Tops meets Vivian by ~Koleyl:iconKoleyl:



The Tops have enter in a spooky forest, there has been a report
about a strange purple ghost being sighted around.

Toppy: Okay men, at ease. Now lets set up camp and we can have...

Tops: CHILI DOGS!
Oh...when your out in the woods.
Your stomach is in need for something good.
Like trail mix and orange juice.
Special treats to turn you loose.
Now lets hop on a log.
And lets enjoy our chili dogs. YEAH!

Boxcy: Me and Socky will get the fire started.

Socky: Yeah.

Boxcy and Socky went to gather sticks and twigs.

Socky: Um...y-you don't think there really is a ghost out here do ya?

Boxcy: Ah phooey it's all in your head. Now quit being a baby and help me.

Socky toss some rocks away, not knowing he is hitting Boxcy.

Boxcy: OW!

Socky: What happen?

Boxcy: Nothing. *toss a rock at Socky*

Socky: OW!! Hmm, ruff, ruff.

Voice: Tee, hee, hee.

Boxcy: Hmm? Did you hear that?

Socky: Yeah...hey look what I found.

He picks up a pointy hat with red and white stripes.

Boxcy: Now who ya suppose drop this hat?

Socky: Not me, it ain't my style.

Voice: Exuse me.

They turn to see what appears to look like a purple blob, wearing white gloves on it's hands and has pink hair that covers it's eyes.

Thing: But thats my hat.

Both: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

They drop the hat and ran as the thing shouts...

Thing: Oh please don't run. Oh dear.

As they ran they got back to camp and crash into Toppy and Curly.

Curly: Duh whats with you guys?

Toppy: Yeah you look like you've seen a ghost.

Boxcy: WE ALMOST GOT EATEN BY ONE!

Socky: Yeah, it's a great big purple blob.

Curly: Duh hey you promise not to make fun of my weight.

Boxcy: Not you stupid, the ghost.

Curly: Duh ghost?

Socky: Yeah it has a purple body like her, white gloves like the one shes wearing, and has pink hair and a funny hat like her.

Toppy: "Her"? Who's her?

Socky: That her.

he points to the thing Boxcy and Socky has encounter, it was the ghost it follow them back.

Tops: AAAAAAAAAHHHH!!

Ghost: AAAAHHHHH!

The Tops and the Ghost hid...as they gather their breathes.

Toppy: Hmm, hey that thing is scare of us as we are of it.

Boxcy: Well what does it want?

Toppy: lets see.

They went up to the ghost, they see it is crying.

Toppy: Um...we're sorry but who are you?

Ghost: *sniffs, sniffs* I'm Vivian, I'm a shadow siren. I got lost in this wood. I don't know where I am...AND I'M SO SCARE WAH!!

Toppy: Gosh we're sorry. Your lost?

Vivian: Sniff, I live in Twilight Town. My sisters didn't want anything to do with me so they just left me.

Boxcy: Grr why those so and so. Let me at them I'll show'em.

Vivian: Now I don't know what to do.

Toppy: Hmm, say if you want you can stay with us until tommorrow morning. Then we'll take you back to town.

Vivian: Oh you four will? OH THANK YOU!

She hugs Toppy and gave him a kiss. Causing Toppy to blush a bright red.

Toppy: Oh my goodness...er...I...um...gulp!

At the campfire they roasted marshmellows.

Curly: DUH OUCH!

Boxcy: Your suppose to wait until the fire is out you dummy.

Curly: Duh now I know.

Toppy: Thanks for making the fire. Where you learn to do fire spells?

Vivian: Oh each Shadow Siren is gifted with a different spell. My sister Beldam use ice, my other sister uses lighting. Me I'm best at fire...ACK! Oh dear my marshmellow.

Toppy: No worries you can have mine.

When the morning came, the towns people of Twilight Town welcome Vivian back.

Boxcy: Man, who knew there be a town full of talking rag dolls.

Socky: Not me man.

Mayor: Thank you for bringing our fair Vivian back. We promise she'll have a nice home.

Vivian: Thank you four for helping me.

Tops: No problem.

Toppy: If you need to visit us don't hesitate.

Vivian: I will and thank you.

Soon the Tops left the town, knowing how good it is to help others. Not to judge things by apperance, and...well there is one thing they haven't learn yet. How to get out of a forest.

Toppy: Hello?

Boxcy: Grr theres never a map when we need one.

Curly: Duh does the sun set in the north? Or the east?

Socky: West young man, go west.


The End.
©2005-2009 ~Koleyl
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See what happens when you take four little Triceratops Anthros and one shadow Siren from Paper Mario.
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cool story!^_^ i like it:)

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*If you are a fan of Vivian, a partner in Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door, please join!*
Thank you, you know your the first one to ever compliment on one of my stories. So what do you think about The Tops helping Vivian?
Like I said, not bad, not bad.
However, considering you want advanced critique (which is good), I will say that some punctuation and grammar would make this better. It's mostly commas.

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And this Vivian fan club actually works!
Sorry, can't help it.

But thanks for adding it to the faves.
No problemo.

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And this Vivian fan club actually works!

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